Writing Sample Term 2 2014 28 May.
My most favourite person is my auntie called sandra because she helps me with my homework she also takes me to the Skate Park to play with my Scooter,she also takes me to the Supermarket to buy some Ice-Cream and some Cake with Vanilla Icing on top and also Sprinkles on it too. sandra always be kind to me and always takes me where I want to go. sandras hair colour is light red and some are blondy sandra wheres dresses to church when it is church time when she takes me somewhere she wears good clothes like long red jeans, a t-shirt that says her full name on it her full name on is sandra Peneh Falevaai Mataia it also says samoa on it it has got patterns on it too. sandra is tall and slim she always have a happy face whenever I see her face.Whenever I cry she comes and cheer me up.When I wake up she makes me a milo and toast for Breakfast, for lunch she brings me an Ice-block,Ice-cream and also a Strawberry drink that we made before yesterday and for Dinner she brings me crackling,Bread with Chiken and last but not least for desert she gives me Ice-cream,Cake,and also fishnchips.
My most favourite person in my family.
I liked how you use very good vocabulary and I liked how you describe your Aunty really well. I loved how you said that your Aunty come to cheer you up whenever you cry. You had done a really good describe writing about your Aunty.
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